Characteristics of good writing

I have spent the weekend reading some great books, including:

  • 11/22/63 by Stephen King
  • Exile’s Return by Malcolm Cowley
  • Green Hills of Africa by Ernest Hemingway
  • Silken Prey by John Sandford

Each book has been a joy to read; each book has engaged me.  I could not put Exile’s Return down forcibly.  It left my hands only when I fell asleep.  Before that happened, I felt admiration for Cowley and the other authors I have been reading and asked:

  • Why am I enjoying this so much?
  • How have they drawn me in?
  • How did they transport me to Africa, Greenwich Village, Paris, Africa, Lisbon and make me feel I was walking the streets, actively a part of and engaging with the main characters?
  • What makes these authors great authors?
  • What are they doing that I like?
  • And, just what constitutes good writing?

Having my iPad at my side, I opened Evernote and quickly wrote a note on ‘Good Writing.’  Here is what I felt were some of the reasons I was reading good writing:

  • Properly paced
  • Easy, well-structured style
  • Punchy with few extraneous words
  • Good (close to perfect) grammar, unless it choked style
  • Good simile
  • Everyday-speak
  • Engaging story
  • Material portrayed confidence the author knew what he was talking about (the author had a voice as others have called it)

I need to review these and continue to refine the characteristics that defines good writing.  For now, I am going to clip these to the side of my screen and aspire to achieve them.

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I am noticeably improving as a writer, but far from the abilities of Hemingway, King Cowley or Sandford!  I will continue to improve.  While not studying how to write, I am a student of writing and continue to learn.  I learned a lot this weekend by reading other great writers.

I wrote 150,000 words two years ago, 350,000 words last year and hope to do 500,000 this year with a target of 700,000 – 800,000 after that.  At 5 million words, I will have my 10,000 hours in as a writer (if you add up the time it took to conceptualize, research, write and edit).  By then, I hope to close the gap just a little between Hemingway, King, Cowley, Sandford and me.

What do you think constitutes good writing?  I want to continue to learn from you as well as other masters of the craft.

 

Steve Shipley, author of Wine Sense, due out early 2014
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One comment

  • Ken Farmer on January 27, 2014 at 11:46 pm said:

    Didn’t see “Great word pictures” anywhere. In order to suck the reader in, the writer has to create “see, hear, feel, taste and smell” pictures for the reader.